'google658fd05d77029796.html' Gunehgaar | The Original Poetry





khul ke barsee nahi to kya, 
kam se kam ghata chhayi to thi..
do ghadi do pal hi sahi,
rukhsaar pe hansi aayi to thi..

uski qurbat mein hum kuch aise doobe,
poshida hui aankhein, aql par parda tha..
qaatil ke mansoobon ko na jaan sake,
bewafayi ka apna pehla tajurba tha..

zehar sharaab mein ghola zaroor,
pyaala to magar sabra ka hi laayi thi..
aakhri baar kahan chhoda yaad nahin,
pata to kisi kabra ka hi laayi thi..

yun to shikwa hum kar bhi lete,
par uski taqseeron mein khud bhi shumar hue they..
uske aane aur jane ke beech jo marghat hai,
wahin kahin khud ke gunehgaar hue they..

ped gir gaye to ghunche se kya shikayat karein,
jo tod gayi wo hawa nahi aandhi thi..
zehar usne apne haathon se ghola tha,
sharaab to magar humne hi maangi thi..

apni hi aarzoo ke arshh ko koste hain,
gilaa na usse hai, na takdeer se..
panchhi ka thikana to khud hi poochha tha ,
shikari ke tarkash se chhoote teer se..

darpan bhi surat nahin dikhaata ab to,
tasawwur mein apne kesh sanjo leta hu..
dard se mann ka anchal jo maila hai,
barsaat nahi isliye ashqon se dho leta hu..

barbaadi ko magar jashn se sehlaya nahin jata,
haare hue mustaqbil ko kabhi behlaaya nahin jata..
ye zindagi to khuda ka ek noor hai,
ise maut ke talkh chheeton se nahlaaya nahin jata..

bahut ro chuke mazloom mohabbat ki khaak pe,
ek baar to hum himmat bhi aazmaayenge..
jo kabhi pakda khuda ne girebaan mera,
tasallee se faqat ek kissa to sunayenge..

maana zamaane mein uske aashiq purzor honge..
kasmon aur waadon ke hue anginat daur honge..
apni khwahish thi deedar-e-husn mein jeene ki,
uske pyar mein marne wale kamzarf aur honge..

wo bhi ek din yaad karega mujhko,
raat nahi hum uske liye sabaa maangenge..
jo poochhi khuda ne kabhi khwaahish meri,
maafi mile usko, bus yehi dua maangenge..






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  1. Manvendra Rana says:

    Deepak bhaiya kya likhte hein aap ki tasavur mein bhi aise jajbaat umad na payenge, hum to chalenge aapke padchinho par ,raste chahe jahan bhi lejayenge. Bahut behtareen! Umdaa!

  2. Thank you Manvendra.. you are very generous in praise.. I take that with a warm heart.. thank you very much..

    I see you have sent a post.. I am about to read it.. You write very well.. I look forward to see more of your work in different colors..

    Thanks again dear..

  3. Please don't complain that I don't write hindi poems in devnagiri script. I am an author at ezine articles and they don't accept articles from blogs written in any other script other than english. So I have to write hindi poems in english script. I hope you will understand. Enjoy the poem.

  4. I was also wondering why you didn't write it in Hindi script!

    This one is deadly. I am awed by your knowledge of urdu.

    "qaatil ke mansoobon ko na jaan sake,
    bewafayi ka apna pehla tajurba tha.. "

    or

    "jo poochhi khuda ne kabhi khwaahish meri,
    maafi mile usko, bus yehi dua maangenge.."

    great verses!

  5. jahid says:

    Ultimate Sir Ji :)

    Kya likhte ho Deepak Sir..maja aa gaya

  6. I am very bad in understanding these high end urdu writings but found one great talent in you . Keep it up Deepak . thanks for sharing.

  7. Jay Singh says:

    Hi Deepak,

    Chaahat aur bewafaai ka jwalant udahran.
    This is good stuff, its always a delight to read such posts from you. You've made my morning. :) :)

    Regards

    Jay
    My Blog | My Entry to Indiblogger Get Published

  8. Wah-wah! such a beautiful composition.Dil ko bhaa gayi! :)

  9. wonderful nice use of words

  10. Thank you Meenakshi.. I am really glad you like it.

    You are always a pleasure to have my friend. :)

  11. Arey Jahid Sir ji.. Kya baat keh di apne.. :)

  12. Thank you Vishal for reading and appreciating my effort.. I look forward to see you more here.. Thanks once again dear.

  13. Thank you Jay for making me a part of your morning. It gives me immense pleasure to hear such words from writers like you..

  14. Hello Gayatri.. Thank you so much for stopping by. I am really glad I could do that. See you around dear. Thanks once again.

  15. Thank you cifarshayar.. you are a shayar yourself.. It is a pleasure to have you here.. I am glad I could please your poetry senses.

  16. ultimate....no word to explain...just amazing...now i believe that u r the next shakespeare...
    jo kabhi pakda khuda ne girebaan mera,
    tasallee se faqat ek kissa to sunayenge...
    what an amazing line...

  17. i believe no other writer can create such a blend of bewafai and love...

  18. Thank you Chaudhary.. you are my strongest pillar of strength brother..

  19. Maliny says:

    i cant understand it to its full essence because i am from south india :/ . . looking forward to your english poems and stories :)

  20. sahe says:

    U have a way aith words. Anyone can write stories, poems are a different ball game altogether. Inspiring.

  21. Thank you Maliny for stopping by.. I will come with some english stuff for you for sure.. :)

  22. Thank you Sahe for your kind words. I take them gleefully. I would love to see you around a bit more.. :)

  23. every word is so full of the emotions of a lover

    jo poochhi khuda ne kabhi khwaahish meri,
    maafi mile usko, bus yehi dua maangenge..

    beautiful

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  24. Deepak you are an EXCELLENT poet ,i am happy to have found your blog...so many verses but not a single spurious word..and the flow off emotions-----hats off!!!!!!

  25. Thank you Indu.. It is always great to see you around..

    Thank you my friend.. :)

  26. Thank you Medha. I hope to see you more in these pages. :)

  27. bahut khoob...
    kya gajab kha hein,

    khul ke barsee nahi to kya,
    kam se kam ghata chhayi to thi..

  28. Thank you Sunil boss.. Feedback from you is always valuable.

  29. Swati says:

    tremendously wonderful deepak ji...

    behtreen lafz....

    "jo poochhi khuda ne kabhi khwaahish meri,
    maafi mile usko, bus yehi dua maangenge.."

    ye sher haasil-e-mehfil laga!!

  30. Mixi says:

    My knowledge of Urdu is scanty at best
    I Googled a lot of the words
    I asked my husband the meaning of the rest
    But in the end it was all well worth!

  31. दर्द की तासीर बयान

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