behind this smile
lies a painful file
i had gone a mile
but everything got destructed in a while

no hard feelings
but this heart keeps drilling
even in june
it leaves me chilling

all the moments we were together
i kept furling like a feather
every moment was autumn weather
but she left me alone
in a moment,
everything was gone

no hard feelings
but this heart keeps drilling
even in june
it leaves me chilling


this loneliness prevails
i am totally derailed
as if i am jailed
i am totally alone at this junction
feeling bad, 
oh i can't function

but no hard feelings
my heart keeps drilling
even in june
it leaves me chilling


so what
she is still in my dreams
i keep floating in memory stream
from my dreams,
i keep churning cream

but my soul keeps reeling
still no hard feeling
and this heart keeps drilling
even in june
it leaves me chilling



By Sourabh Kumar (Guest Writer)


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14 Responses so far.

  1. a beautiful rhyming poem with some deep thoughts and true emotions.

    LOVELY :)

  2. Anjan Roy says:
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  3. Anjan Roy says:

    i always feel rhyming words...gives an extra edge to the poem...and this is such a beautifully crafted poem i fell in love with the words...!!!

  4. good rhyming . Reminded my heartbreak too .

  5. vaisakhi says:

    i loved the flow...beautiful poem...:)

  6. nice senti poem..ya love is painful....

    love is great , love is heavenly ,,love is blind!!
    but it empties yr pocket and makes u loose yr mind :P :D

  7. Unknown says:

    HI,
    WISH YOU AND YOUR LOVED ONES A VERY HAPPY VALENTINE's DAY..HAVE A GOOD ONE.NICE POEM
    Regards
    kiran
    www.shopncool.com

  8. Beautifully done, repetition has a given it a lyrical edge.

  9. this poem progresses like a song,there should me music to these words

  10. Panchali says:

    Beautiful...rhyming makes the reading absolutely pleasurable,Deepak.!

  11. Maliny, says:

    I admire rhymes in poetry . .Loved this poem . . simple yet evocative . The repetitiveness has added more colour to the verse :)

  12. Suganya says:

    Everything rhymes :-D :-D Good one :D

  13. SOURABH KUMAR says:

    thank u all:-)

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